Hole Moment, by beccamarie Subscribe to rss feed for beccamarie

It took just but a moment
for me to give you me heart
and all that i had
and it took just a few moments
before everything was torn to shreds
your touch has gone cold
all words are now shallow
love is no longer there
not even that a friendship takes
you've taken the most wonderful thing
either of us may have known
but it's my fault too
and thats the worst part
because i gave you something fragile
something that you promised not to break
a promise i've heard you make before
I've watched it shatter and break before
like a movie that I've seen before
a movie that I've memorized
one I swore I'd never play a role in
but then here I am 
reciting my lines
in the role I was born to play


**hard night. came out of emotion. so have all the others
but this one I don't like very much. not at all really. i
love a couple of the lines. but they aren't working together
in this piece. it's not flowing like I want it too. **
Posted: 2006-07-20 16:20:39 UTC

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