suicide, by Eric
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"SUICIDE"
WHY IS IT SO WRONG TO WANT TO JUMP
DOES IT JUST HURT YOU TO MUCH
OR IS IT A FEAR OF LOSS
I COULDN'T TRUELY CARE
BUT WHAT IS IT THAT MAKES A MAN A MAN
WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO STEP UP TO THE LINE
AND THROW YOUR SHIRT ASIDE
TO LOOK AT YOUR WAEPON AND SAY IT
FREE ME FROM THIS WORLD OF MAKE BELIEVE
AND WHAT DOES IT TAKE FOR YOU TO SLAP LIFE
IN THE FACE AND SAY IT FOR ME
BECAUSE YOU WON'T LET ME SAY IT MYSELF
ALWAYS MAKEING IT SEEM BETTTER
FLOODING MY HEAD WITH LIES
OF GOOD FEELINGS
SO YOU CAN TAKE IT AWAY AND NOT FORGIVE ME |
Posted: 2006-10-14 02:09:11 UTC |
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2006-11-05 05:59:31 | blackflamingo |
Are you writing a shit load of stuff that makes suicide look cool so that you'll feel better about doing it later on or because you just believe in free will? I like your point but the poem doesn't pull me. The poem seems as if it was written for you, not for your audience. But I'm just a bitch. |