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"SUICIDE"

WHY IS IT SO WRONG TO WANT TO JUMP 
DOES IT JUST HURT YOU TO MUCH 
OR IS IT A FEAR OF LOSS 
I COULDN'T TRUELY CARE 

BUT WHAT IS IT THAT MAKES A MAN A MAN 
WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO STEP UP TO THE LINE 
AND THROW YOUR SHIRT ASIDE 
TO LOOK AT YOUR WAEPON AND SAY IT 

FREE ME FROM THIS WORLD OF MAKE BELIEVE 
AND WHAT DOES IT TAKE FOR YOU TO SLAP LIFE 
IN THE FACE AND SAY IT FOR ME 
BECAUSE YOU WON'T LET ME SAY IT MYSELF 

ALWAYS MAKEING IT SEEM BETTTER
FLOODING MY HEAD WITH LIES  
OF GOOD FEELINGS 
SO YOU CAN TAKE IT AWAY AND NOT FORGIVE ME
Posted: 2006-10-14 02:09:11 UTC

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2006-11-05 05:59:31blackflamingo
Are you writing a shit load of stuff that makes suicide look cool so that you'll feel better about doing it later on or because you just believe in free will? I like your point but the poem doesn't pull me. The poem seems as if it was written for you, not for your audience. But I'm just a bitch.