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I just thought it would be fun to do this, all you have to
so, is leave a line of poetry(or as many as you want) and I
will add it to this poem! This can be an extremely awesome
poem... but I need YOU to help me out! :)


When darkness creeps into one's life,
with excruciating pain and vehement strife. 
There's hope to find a better way, 
if we just walk another day.
All will come, in due time.
Even in this rhyme
To find ourselves in light again
Never look back at the pain again, 
it seems so hard to do but in the end 
it becomes of what you want it
Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves
that glorifies the true purpose of life
For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the
tinkling tune of a fife.
believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a
knife
WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.
A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and
Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's
Living above a selfish Hate!
A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those
who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight



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When darkness creeps into one's life,
with excruciating pain and vehement strife. 
There's hope to find a better way, 
if we just walk another day.    (Glostarg)

All will come, in due time. (Julieeee) 

Even in this rhyme (anna) 

To find ourselves in light again (liberty moon)

Never look back at the pain again, 
it seems so hard to do but in the end 
it becomes of what you want it to
               (Insanity of Ones Self (your comments are
greatly appreciated))

Solitude is when we indulge in the beauty within ourselves
that glorifies the true purpose of life (Expressive Child)

For when you find the true purpse tis glorious like the
tinkling tune of a fife. (Kicon)

believe in yourself and you'll come to life. No need for a
knife  (Smiling Darkness)

WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.
(true poet)

A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and
Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's
Living above a selfish Hate! (CAPRISTAR)

A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those
who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight 
(Invisible Poet)
Posted: 2008-12-13 06:52:31 UTC

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2006-11-06 15:19:03 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
When darkness creeps into one's life,with excruciating pain and vehement strife. There's hope to find a better way, if we just walk another day.

2007-06-12 06:36:40*Psychopathic Child*
never look back at the pain again, it seems so hard to do but in the end it becomes of what you want it to

2008-02-10 17:12:01true_poet
WE need to overcome this pain and move on to our future.

2008-02-14 21:37:50true_poet
Hey thankz for the comment you and daydreamBeliever are the only ones that comment..Does it take that long?? Lolz Check out my poem ''Change''

2008-02-23 16:26:00 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
A Future Of Bright and Happy Tomorrows A Future of Hope and Love, My friend's it's not too Late. A Life that WILL's it's Living above a selfish Hate!

2008-03-21 07:03:40Invisible Poet
A future of reckoning and self hate is all that await those who take the easy way out, for what is life without fight