Tell Me Why, by Chalan Subscribe to rss feed for Chalan

My heart has began to melt.
I'm feeling emotions that I 
never before felt.
I'm in all new territory and
I'm about to write a new chapter
in my life's story.
But then there is an awful twist
For there is another whom you have 
kissed.
Your love for her is beginning to
unfold
and she is the one you want to hold.
Tell me why it can't be me.
Tell me why I have to live with this
agony.
Now my love has been revealed and
you know exactly how I feel.
I held my heart out in my hand.
Tell me why you can't understand?
I took a chance for you 
and now because of her we're through.


Chalan
Posted: 2006-12-30 18:06:43 UTC

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2007-01-16 17:50:05BananaIceCream
that's really good, v heartfelt

2007-02-10 18:14:16Lil'Fighter
You write good poetry. Good Job! I look forward to reading more of your work.

2007-02-13 17:01:00Lil'Fighter
Thanks for your comments to my poems! I appreciate them. Your poetry is brilliant! I love it! You have a talent! Great Job!

2008-12-19 07:14:58LostSoul
Thank you for the comment. I can relate to this poem very well.

2009-05-14 23:50:39*Psychopathic Child*
this poem is full of heartfelt feelings, that make the poem burst your emotions. Very well written poem. Amazing.

2009-10-12 00:22:59Lovecrafter
thanks for the comment...you are great if better.