.......Damn It......, by -fruit-loop- Subscribe to rss feed for -fruit-loop-

.Races creeds n cultures
why is yours better than mine
their is but one creator
and we class that one devine

so if you have religion
and relate to a holy book
why do we wish to cause each other harm
simply because of the way we look

weve been here many a million years
and if we want a million more
we better begin to relate to each other
and not your or i..deplore

so my many creeds n cultures
each other we need to adopt
and this hate and fear and anguish
for once...and forever...can be stopped

borrowed from our children
this is mother natures planet
hand in hand we all can change
if not we'll surely damn it

(this came into my head at work..
over a discussion of the ignorant..
or a discusson with the ignorant ).
Posted: 2007-11-17 02:55:27 UTC

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2007-01-15 22:03:26Chalan
very thought provoking

2007-05-24 02:41:24Angel of Music
wow this is really good and so true! keep up the good work!

2007-06-12 03:52:07User
Thank you for all of your comments, your poems are all 'technically well written' - no wonder..

2007-06-22 23:10:16Shattered Mirror
love it and some people are very ignorant

2007-08-15 00:54:23-fruit-loop-
theres nothing technical about my work.,.,E C ,.,.it whitters from the mind,,. the only gramma i have on a poem.,., was edited by another.,., I myself,..,,.shmeh i was having a bad day,.,. ignore me.,.,i dont recall wich poem (s) i ranted at you over,.., ''i would appollogise.,., but you'd not accept,.,. dont let the minds of other make you beleive you,., to be inept''.

2007-08-15 00:56:51-fruit-loop-
this place should have a mailing system,.., so you can send mail to ppl ,.., instead of only the comments,,.,.,., but nvm,,