Who said, by mealone
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Who said love is forever?
Who said friendship is forever?
Who said God is always with you?
Who said there is always a hope?
Who said there is justice?
Who said pain will be gone?
Who said time will cure pain?
I am alone here.....
(This is my first attempt to write a poem in English. I am
not a naitive speaker. I would like to throw my ongoing
feelings. I seems to find a way out. Thank you!) |
| Posted: 2005-03-18 15:51:53 UTC |
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| 2005-08-14 17:55:36 | Sara |
| I agree it is very deep, very thoughtful too. Its good i like it. |
| 2006-04-03 17:11:40 | ♥Just Sam♥ |
| Iunno, who told you? You suck at writing in english, stick to... whatever the hell you speak. And I always thought it was "Pain heals over time" not "time will cure pain"... tupid!
Best wishes-
Ookami and Friend |
| 2006-06-29 06:18:18 | User |
| Thoughtful indeed..I look forward to all
your poems and works in future..!! |
| 2007-01-07 14:49:30 | BananaIceCream |
| even english speakers would find it hard to write poems with that much feeling in it. really really good! |
| 2012-10-11 17:05:32 | nellyuu |
| Hello Dear... ([email protected]) is my email
My name is Miss Nelly ,I wish i could get to know you for it is my pleasure to have you as my friend for a friend is all about Respect,Admiration and Passion also friendship consist sharing of ideas and showing true love without cheats,lies and betrayal and i have this feelings to share with you, i believe that you are the type of one that i want in my life for a serious relationship,i want you to know that age, race,and religion is not important to me all that is important to me is pure love,waiting to hear from you i will send you my picture please reach me at ([email protected]), sorry i could not upload my picture here, but i well send you some as soon as i read from you, Have a beautiful day thanks,
([email protected]) Miss Nelly. |