human hamster wheel, by mytruth Subscribe to rss feed for mytruth

Tell me about these
viscious cycles
I put myself thru.

I turn 'round and 'round and 'round...

Tell me why
it doesn't feel 
comfortable
anymore.

Tell me why 
it hurts.

Show me the way out.
Posted: 2007-05-21 07:59:35 UTC

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2007-05-21 16:58:13Angel of Music
Great job I really love the emotion that you put into this poem!

2007-08-27 17:21:45Lydia
again fantastic work.

2009-05-16 18:23:50...
This is great, so simple but it portrays emotion brilliantly!