See The Dawn, by Felicia Subscribe to rss feed for Felicia

I know i broke your heart
But i loved you from the start
I wanted to let you know 
But i was scared to let it show

I turned down your kiss
I know I'll never love like this
Into the morning I will cry 
Till my tears they all run dry

I know she loves you dear
But thats exactly what i fear 
Its all to much to bare
This life isn't fair

I was living one big lie
sometimes i wish i would die
But life will go on
I will see the dawn 
Posted: 2007-05-30 19:48:17 UTC

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2007-05-30 21:25:13Angel of Music
Good job. -luv Amanda

2007-06-01 20:18:48Acushla
wow, i love it

2009-03-08 01:05:40Tyler Cedric Golden
i would love to help you in anyway possible for you to continue your work and if reading anothers poem to get an idea helps then if you would like read my poem Riding Through the Burning Wind or Crept Up From Underneath, Or Lost Under Sands' Pressure or i dont know you choose because i think it will truly help give you ideas....and thank you for your previous comment and i do like the way you wrote this and i love the ending to show life shall always continue..great job!

2009-03-22 05:29:55!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
BEAUTIFUL