the universe, by Chrissy Subscribe to rss feed for Chrissy

Your smile is the moon
My laugh is the sun
Your yell is the clouds
My tears are the rain
We are the universe
Together—we create peace
You don’t see it
You don’t care
Where are you?
When I truly need help?
When I am so down, and blue?
That’s when you should be around
But if you don’t know, 
Then why would you be?
Should I tell you how I feel?
Then you can be there for me
Even if you knew, would you?
I don’t know why you would
I’ve never done anything for you
Except love you, more than anyone else
Spend my hours awaiting the day
You finally look in my general direction
But I guess that’s not enough.
I suppose the universe is about to fall
Posted: 2008-01-20 03:52:30 UTC

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2008-02-16 03:05:04Simply-Me-20104
WOW.. I'm sure a lot of others can relate to this poem! I love the personification and metaphor used in this poem! Great Job!

2009-04-11 03:43:09!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
i have to agree this is amazing !!