what are you staring at, by Invisible Poet Subscribe to rss feed for Invisible Poet

why do you look at me that way
staring at the paint on my nails 
the only thing your little mind can mutter is "gay"
i've walked this path before these are wellworn trails

so my nails are black and soul is dead
so what are you staring at
for my life you wouldn't even get out of bed
but in that room i sat

full of poeple like you
the ones you want to beat with a baeball bat
yes they were staring too
so what the fuck are you staring at

so what my nails are a different shade
does that make me emo or gay
well your so much better, want to trade
like hell ill trade someone who looked at me that way

im not so different
from him, her, or you
except i have the ability to repent
believ it or not i feel sorry for you too
Posted: 2008-02-20 10:44:24 UTC

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2008-02-20 17:09:30 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
I love these last words in your poem: im not so different from him, her, or you except i have the ability to repent believ it or not i feel sorry for you too... this is a truth you have ability to repent, and so does the rest of the world. so your not so different from another person.I like this very much! Great job! even with the sharp but accurate adjustments. :) Glo

2008-03-12 19:05:32a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.
yeah your sooo good! and i agree as every one thinks that they have it better then you well you may think they suck... lol

2008-05-07 13:53:23Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
this is really great and thnx for the comment

2009-03-12 03:31:26Tyler Cedric Golden
it was in no sense of laughing towards your feelings as of mine it was a sense of optimism to brighten my day as well as yours hoping to improve quality in comments to one another...do not feeled alarmed or personal but such simplitic comments for they have only a minor impact upon ones life...disregard it if you must.