Lost your Trust, by Invisible Poet
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What have i done
im drowning in the emotional storm
i thought we were done
but your love i will ever mourn
and i feel that ill never get it back
i dont want you only for lust
without you my world goes black
and i still dont have your trust
its shredding me into an emotional mass
you fill my dreams with guilt
i feel like such a dumbass
like my love is nothing but silt
in the murky water that is you
I know my place
forever with you attempting to whoo
as a tear forms an my face
without you by my side
my heart turns to dust
i didn't matter how hard i tried
i still lost your trust |
| Posted: 2008-07-22 08:44:04 UTC |
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| 2008-08-01 19:53:07 | ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 |
| I know that a lot of ppl can relate to this poem!! And I completely admire your "abab" format! I can NOT do that for some reason haha Great poem! |
| 2008-10-17 14:44:17 | ray! |
| emotions come through clear and strong in this poem, I like it. |
| 2010-04-09 22:10:08 | KK |
| I can relate unfortunately....
Ha, It's like you have a poem for every emotion I have.
Everytime I'm feeling bad or something, I find myself reading your poems over and over again until i forget about why I was even feeling that way.
I wish I could write just as good! |