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In the shadow of my soul
i only do what i am told
and i will never be whole
i will be forever cold

Inside this shell
that is my body
theirs the toll of the bell
our outer appearance is so gaudy

I dont see how anyone 
could have made us so flawed
he stopped halfway through and said done
the empty cold of my soul will never be thawed

If their is a god
then i wish he was dead
instead of some drunken sod
filling everybodys head

With shitty ideas 
and false beliefs
my life is not on a dias
my soul is my own to keep.
Posted: 2008-08-29 22:55:32 UTC

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2008-09-11 03:02:34loving and dreaming.
I have complete adoration for this piece. Well done.

2008-11-03 15:10:04Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
yes it is well done, thank you for the comment, i hope your not mad i put you on my user info.... because your poems really are amazing!!

2009-02-05 15:19:34Ashley Reneƫ *Raining Tears*
(they still are)___(:

2009-12-03 23:54:53Katelyn7
wow. i love this!