As the World Melts Away..., by A Person
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All that we are, all that we pretend to be
Just melts away
Gaze into the night
See the stars falling
Catch them before they hit the ground
It's all so beautiful, tonight
Though we are losing ourselves
But it's okay because
This is how everything is meant to be
As the night consumes us
We hold hands and wish everything away
And wake to the dawn
Swallowing us
Our minds slowly die
But our hearts still beat strong
Now we found where we belong
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Posted: 2008-11-21 04:19:24 UTC |
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2009-02-03 01:55:54 | Chalan |
I liked this poem. But I don't think it was constructed right... the wording seemed a little scattered to me. It wasn't bad though. |
2009-03-08 05:45:04 | twinkle_t |
I really liked this poem. |
2009-03-18 09:21:33 | Metamorphoser |
nice combination coming from heart and mind but was it meant not to rhyme.. |
2009-05-16 08:55:10 | sammya |
its a lovely poem and you should do more! |
2009-05-16 16:29:20 | Your Everlasting |
Good just like the other one you wrote!Keep it up! |
2009-07-26 22:13:26 | x--poison_pen--x |
poems don't have to have structure!
i thought it was amazing XD |
2009-08-06 19:58:37 | ♥ Leah ☺ |
this one is really good, so's ur other one. but, i prefer this one. just my opinion :) |
2009-10-01 22:20:30 | (darkkisses) |
nice poem i really get it :) check out some of my poems and tell my what you think of them if you wont to my poems are a bit dark doe :) lol |
2009-11-07 20:36:12 | Amber |
i really really love this poem. it's amazing. =] |
2010-05-05 01:35:30 | |
This one IS a little bit better than your other one...but they are both very good! |