Pain, by Zelion Thunder Subscribe to rss feed for Zelion Thunder 

10/29/2004

Why do I hold onto hope?
It it that I'm just dope?
All in all in the end I can't cope!

I feel rage and pain.
All these feelings enter my brain.
And yet my eyes cry like rain.

A sweet massacre of my soul.
I always lose this control.
I just keep diggin my own hole!

I burn with hatred from within.
But all they do is sit and grin.
I should just die and let them win!

I hope it fails.
and I hope it dies.
Because no one ever really hears my cries.
Posted: 2008-12-12 09:05:41 UTC
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2009-01-09 17:26:15Tyler Cedric Golden
this is a very good poem along with the point hopelessness and description used...hmmm if you want my poem (Concept of Hell) relates to this quite well if you would like to take a look but nonetheless fantastic job...