L.I.F.E (my meaning), by CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
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L- Low starndars, we get all get by, by doing nothing, other
over achieve, the rest under.
I- If? What If? Every one wonders other actually do. Pain?
Death? Love? Sorrow? Forgiveness? Been-there-Done-that
F- fucked up! All im gonna say
E- Energetic? not me!!
ITS BAD I KNOW!!! |
| Posted: 2009-03-14 23:10:02 UTC |
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| 2009-03-14 23:35:58 | Gutta Chic |
| This is a very good poem i feel as though i'm connected |
| 2009-03-24 03:03:49 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| i dont think you should feel this way about life try to look for more positive things in life you know. |
| 2009-03-24 11:24:11 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| eah, i actually am about to make my positive version of life. lets just say i was not happy when i wrote this!! |
| 2009-03-24 20:43:22 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
| well ill be waiting to read you positive outlook on life |
| 2009-05-23 17:56:29 | Your Everlasting |
| This has some good meaning to it.Good job.Oh yeah sorry I made you cry.Thanks for the comments! |
| 2009-05-24 16:09:24 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| its ok u making me cry is a good thing, thats how great ur poem was!! THANX FOR THE COMMENT
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| 2009-07-10 00:57:24 | Nightlife |
| Hahaha love it! I like the little humor in this poem and the reality! Nice! Done and said. |
| 2009-09-02 18:35:22 | ♥ Leah ☺ |
| I can relate |
| 2010-04-01 05:37:28 | baya |
| hmmm mind if i try something like this?? this is very inspirational . . . I LOVE IT!! |