Does it Ever End?, by izzy Subscribe to rss feed for izzy

Please remove,
your simple guise.
In other words,
remove your eyes.

I saw a mound,
a mound of lies.
It's memories like these,
from which I cry.

Come on now,
make your decision.
You cut me deep, 
cut me right open.

Unfortunately,
without much precision.
I never said,
you could come in.

You took my heart, 
and made it melt.
So poignant,
but so heartfelt...

Does it ever end?
Posted: 2009-03-15 17:28:16 UTC

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2009-03-25 21:21:26!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!
beautifully written

2009-04-08 20:20:05CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART
this is wrtitten so powefully!!! very good

2009-04-14 16:29:31...
Ooooh I love it! Just beautiful... wow

2009-04-29 18:13:39Gemma.
Nice.

2009-05-17 23:57:17Your Everlasting
Written with beauty.Thanks for the comment!:)

2009-05-28 12:38:45dispersed_sky
you know how to xpress your feelings goodluck

2009-06-15 23:29:24~The Familiar Side of Strange~
very well written. thanks for the comments. good luck.

2009-07-26 05:43:47Lily
you have great talent

2009-12-30 03:04:21Convalescence
I Love it.

2010-02-07 00:30:08Disruptive Silence
this is so good! it has such meaning! you are an amazing writer