Burning Skin., by Tyler Cedric Golden
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I am getting frustrated and very short pateint,
I try to remain calm, but now I am starting to fake it,
For what you did to me, all of those lies,
From what we've been through, all of those laughs and all of
those cries,
This misery inside me makes me want to die,
I can't hold it back any longer,
It rises to my internal surface and makes me feel stronger,
I release all of the anger, hidden within,
In which the end result ruined my life, all because of my
burning skin. |
| Posted: 2009-03-27 19:51:11 UTC |
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| 2009-03-25 20:56:57 | MorbidMaiden |
| I love this. You can feel the tension and building internal pressure - it's aa real as you emotions.
xxx |
| 2009-03-27 00:20:29 | izzy |
| this is really great. great job expressing all the emotional pressure. i could feel it increasing every line. |
| 2009-04-09 00:10:02 | Dore' |
| I can tell that you best express yourself through your poetry. It makes people feel as if they are in your position. And from the comments above, I can clearly see I wasnt the only one affected. |