i will never forget, by feelingforgotten
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i will never forget the first day i saw you
i will never forget the first note you wrote me
or our first phone call
i will never forget the first time we went out
i will never forget the first time you lips touched mine
i wont ever forget the first time i felt myself fall for
you
how could have you forgotten?
why cant these things ever be true?
how come it seems you dont care the way you say you do..
no matter how much it hurts
no matter how much i cry
i now know
that i will never forget |
| Posted: 2005-01-08 23:17:25 UTC |
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| 2005-06-11 07:53:39 | FirePoet |
| A sad piece but I loved it! |
| 2005-09-18 19:39:26 | Finding Myself♥♥ |
| sad, but touching. you are one that speeks for those to scaird to speak for theirselves |
| 2005-09-29 20:48:07 | Dy'mond (yup yup goon) |
| i diggs ya wordz, n like ya style, holla at cha gurl, n c if u like my flow |
| 2005-11-25 23:09:00 | little_irish_rose |
| truely amazing.... it is truely amazing how someone you don't even know can express how you feel in ways you never thought possible... that's what i wuz thinking while i was reading this poem.... there's so much in this that i can relate to.... you're writing is truely a work of art.... |
| 2007-03-13 01:41:03 | User |
| Yeah...it speaks a lot of truth here.. |
| 2007-05-06 19:02:32 | gwen0193 |
| That is a amazing piece good job! |
| 2007-06-22 23:12:48 | Shattered Mirror |
| boys can be very self centered yet you dont know how they dont see ure hurt i love your poem |
| 2008-01-16 22:59:15 | wife2be |
| this is sad but i like it
somewhat of how i feel |
| 2009-03-21 23:06:31 | CUTTS**AND_A_BROKEN_HEART |
| this is sad!!! i thought it was going to be ahpp until i read the end!
its good though
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| 2009-04-26 04:06:38 | marsha |
| you made me remember, just what 'I will never forget' thank you,,,, great |
| 2010-05-20 14:51:47 | Convalescence |
| I love this. It's beautiful, and I can empathize...
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