Naked, by Ivee Subscribe to rss feed for Ivee

She sees the world as nothing to live for,
As she sinks so deeply into the floor
To her,
She finds it unable to reach that door
Into the reality that is unknown
Helpless,
Innocent,
Wretched,
A terrible sight,
As she sits and waits for the night
When all these pills turn into stars
Where she can be free,
 And no one can see these scars
She has given up every thing she had,
Her pride
She is naked,
And her soul is dead
Her soulless eyes are pools of darkness,
She is drowning
As the black waters enter her chest
There is no hope,
For a gasp of air
The souls of others before her,
Pull her down wards
In her mind she is going crazy,
There is no thought of despair
She flails wildly,
No one seems to care
They glance slightly,
And timidly disappear
These people are all the same,
They all think she is insane
The souls have over come her body,
And she is mad with demonic rage
She can hear a voice that says she has been naughty,
Is she being punished?
She does not know,
There is nothing left to show
For her soul is lost,
It clearly can be stated
To morn for another cast away,
For she is innocent like she is naked
Posted: 2005-01-09 07:48:04 UTC

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2005-03-28 03:26:32lacebutterflies
beautiful, powerful, melancholic imagery.a really good poem.

2005-06-13 01:44:36Loreleen
this is really good

2005-06-29 19:47:34XRebzX
beautiful poem. Meaningful and heartfelt, i really love it, well done!

2005-10-05 19:58:31turquoise petals
Its real without overwhelming you, simply its wonderful

2005-11-11 07:44:39~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~
Awesome poem...keep up your wonderful work!!

2005-12-09 18:38:50Crimson_Tide915
great poem... I like your writing its very artistic... Keep up the good work...(you should check out mine sometime)

2006-06-27 07:00:19User
Can really feel it..for my curiosity.... is something that really happened..?? Sounds sad and full of sorrow..

2008-05-17 00:47:17Nora Eason
the girl in this poem needs God. because he would pull her out of darknes

2009-01-25 00:20:56Natural_beauty_Ashe
ths is deep and really awesome i love it i can relate to the girl in the poem

2010-03-24 23:55:39baya
I love this poem but i am not a fan og rhymes but you used it wisley. this is a very good poem.