Naked, by Ivee |
She sees the world as nothing to live for, As she sinks so deeply into the floor To her, She finds it unable to reach that door Into the reality that is unknown Helpless, Innocent, Wretched, A terrible sight, As she sits and waits for the night When all these pills turn into stars Where she can be free, And no one can see these scars She has given up every thing she had, Her pride She is naked, And her soul is dead Her soulless eyes are pools of darkness, She is drowning As the black waters enter her chest There is no hope, For a gasp of air The souls of others before her, Pull her down wards In her mind she is going crazy, There is no thought of despair She flails wildly, No one seems to care They glance slightly, And timidly disappear These people are all the same, They all think she is insane The souls have over come her body, And she is mad with demonic rage She can hear a voice that says she has been naughty, Is she being punished? She does not know, There is nothing left to show For her soul is lost, It clearly can be stated To morn for another cast away, For she is innocent like she is naked |
Posted: 2005-01-09 07:48:04 UTC |
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2005-03-28 03:26:32 | lacebutterflies |
beautiful, powerful, melancholic imagery.a really good poem. |
2005-06-13 01:44:36 | Loreleen |
this is really good |
2005-06-29 19:47:34 | XRebzX |
beautiful poem. Meaningful and heartfelt, i really love it, well done! |
2005-10-05 19:58:31 | turquoise petals |
Its real without overwhelming you, simply its wonderful |
2005-11-11 07:44:39 | ~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~ |
Awesome poem...keep up your wonderful work!! |
2005-12-09 18:38:50 | Crimson_Tide915 |
great poem... I like your writing its very artistic... Keep up the good work...(you should check out mine sometime) |
2006-06-27 07:00:19 | User |
Can really feel it..for my curiosity.... is something that really happened..?? Sounds sad and full of sorrow.. |
2008-05-17 00:47:17 | Nora Eason |
the girl in this poem needs God. because he would pull her out of darknes |
2009-01-25 00:20:56 | Natural_beauty_Ashe |
ths is deep and really awesome i love it i can relate to the girl in the poem |
2010-03-24 23:55:39 | baya |
I love this poem but i am not a fan og rhymes but you used it wisley. this is a very good poem. |