when i pass you through the halls, by Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* Subscribe to rss feed for Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

when i pass you through the halls
my hands start shaking really bad
my heart starts hammering 
and my mood becomes very mad

you live your life everyday
like what you did you didnt do
you hold her hand and kiss her lips
does she know the true you?

does she know beneath those layers
is a mean and angry man?
that now every second of her future
is screwed up because of what you'll plan?

im sure im not the only one
to whom you've probably hit
but please dont hit anyone else
im sure they dont wanna take your shit

im sure if anyone of them
goes to this school
they pass you through the halls
unsure of what you'll do

because when i pass you through the halls 
my hands start shaking really bad
then my heart starts hammering
and my mood becomes very mad
Posted: 2009-05-18 14:28:12 UTC

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2009-05-21 08:47:29*Psychopathic Child*
this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!)

2009-05-21 08:47:36*Psychopathic Child*
this is a great well written poem. I love it. (I'm finally slowly getting out of my writers block wrote another poem YAY!)

2009-05-21 14:03:38Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thats great! ill read it thank you for the comment

2009-05-24 22:56:35Hannah George
Yeah, it's really nice.

2009-05-25 08:44:17*Psychopathic Child*
your email isn't working i tried to send you an email it said this account has been discontinued or disabled

2009-05-25 08:47:54*Psychopathic Child*
nevermind i figured it out sorry

2009-05-26 13:56:11Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
its ok thank you

2009-05-29 23:38:31dispersed_sky
i can understand ur feeling xpressed in ur poem gr8 job

2009-06-02 13:58:36Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*
thank you

2009-06-11 07:22:45Invisible Poet
New poem dedicated to yourself if you wanna check it out

2009-06-13 17:39:48Invisible Poet
im having a hard time reading the comment you left me on raining tears... what did you think about it

2009-08-14 03:37:36Cortney shea.
omg ashley this poem is so great.. i love you as a sister... hopefully people start to commennt mine =]