"A life without you", by brad1990 Subscribe to rss feed for brad1990

A life without you is like:
The oceans without water,
Just another stupid hole in the ground.
A life without you is like:
The night sky without the stars or the moon,
Just hours of Darkness.
A life without you is like:
A book without words,
Blank
A life without you is like:
A car without fuel,
Useless
But most importantly
A life without you is like:
Me without lungs,
DEAD!!
Posted: 2010-02-01 19:33:35 UTC

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2010-02-08 03:46:25Moon
Deep man, Deep. Awesome job! XXXXMoon

2010-02-08 20:13:36brad1990
thanks it was my first poem ever

2010-02-15 22:40:03KK
This is the kind of poem that I've been looking for. It's kind of how I need to explain how I feel.

2010-02-21 19:28:58brad1990
wow glad i could help

2010-06-24 04:22:02your shining star
i like the repetition, and the similes were very strong! nice!