my love for my girl, by kimo.b |
without you haven isn't so peaceful. with you hell isn't so violent. when I'm with you i see the world pass by. it makes me want to cry all because i never want this feeling to die. |
Posted: 2011-04-27 06:20:30 UTC |
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2016-06-08 16:55:17 | Night |
Good message but you might want to clean up the spelling errors and put some space between your lines. Make sure it flows. Good luck :) |