The first, by eleanor maslen Subscribe to rss feed for eleanor maslen

the moment you kissed me, the moment your lips touched mine
i fell in love with you. I never wanted it to end our lips
to part, I didnt want to leave this dream - to awake into
the cold world we had left together, the posibilities spun
over our heads our eyes closed in mutal longing. 

Then you pulled away and i watched you, and i knew i would
never lay eyes on you again.
Posted: 2011-06-06 19:17:49 UTC

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2011-08-07 08:05:22Natural_beauty_Ashe
Oh ok I see you extended this in the other one I read that one first

2011-08-22 12:36:23eleanor maslen
yea this one kinda came to me and i added to it changed abit and stuff :)