Lovely Demise, by Simply-Me-20104 Subscribe to rss feed for Simply-Me-20104

So hurt... So lost
Out of control
The pain, a cost
Losing my hold
Foot slipped, falling
World going dark
Danger calling
Life is so stark

A confused heart
Breaking away
Can't fall apart
Can't end this way
Tumbling down
Descending fast
Can't make a sound
One breath, my last.
                        
                           10:46pm 12-11-11


*May change the title? Attempt at an ABAB format. I also
don't use separate stanzas very much. Thanks for reading!
Posted: 2011-12-12 04:54:53 UTC

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2012-02-13 18:35:03Convalescence
lovely poem. one of few on this site worth reading.