A Little Bit Deeper, by J. K. Maxwell Subscribe to rss feed for J. K. Maxwell

Your voice;
A little bit deeper
This time.
Your words hit 
A little bit deeper
This time.
They stab
A little bit deeper
This time.
Into my heart,
A little bit deeper
This time.
My thoughts are
A little bit deeper
This time.
My hurt set
A little bit deeper 
This time.
I sink
A little bit deeper
This time.
I cut
A little bit deeper
This time.
Puddles of blood;
A little bit deeper
This time.
I sleep
A little bit deeper
This time.


Posted: 2005-06-08 19:12:48 UTC

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2005-07-20 20:15:41abs
i like it im not quite sure why not my usual thing but something about it is really catchy.

2005-11-17 05:35:40~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~
I loved it!!

2007-01-06 17:01:33BananaIceCream
brilliant, simple and i liked the ending

2007-05-15 23:18:53Angel of Music
Great job! I really liked this one too!