memory of a morning, by fyreflylights
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as i lie here in my blue cocoon
of a sleeping bag at the
crack of november,
i am reminded -
of the comforting bliss of your
ankles mingled with mine,
feet ready to walk but
understanding the importance of
learning to move together
first. i am reminded
of it being odd that i was
so aware of myself,
knees searching solace
and heart tripping unsteadily
as easy fingers
met with your eyelid by mistake.
and i am reminded of a wish
to whisper in your ear:
my body loves its corners
because you fit them. |
Posted: 2005-07-07 04:18:25 UTC |
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2005-07-24 13:44:27 | waterlily |
i like the simplicity of the poem for the warmth it conveys between the two of them.the ending is the sweetest part of human sexpression to me..my body love it corners..cos u fit them!"as love should feel like to us all.warmth and deelightfull it was. |
2010-04-09 01:25:20 | baya |
i liked this poem . . .
the format is amazing this seems to tell a hidden story . . . am i right? |