?lost?, by Michele
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?lost?
Undescribable feelings of a deadend life,
shes not sure where the finish line starts.
She's lost in the world of her own facts and fictions,
she's drowning in ankel deep truth.
She's alone yet surrounded by love,
but she sees only the narrow alleys.
She knows what she wants,
but tries too hard.
Simply lost within a life that exists only in her mind.
Feeling betrayed and forgotten she puts herself under all.
Shes simply stuck in forever and lost in time,
its undescribable feelings of a deadend life.
For: Corey |
Posted: 2005-07-25 19:41:35 UTC |
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2007-03-16 05:15:48 | Angel of Music |
This is a really great poem! Great job! |
2010-11-14 08:24:52 | jennita |
wow deep |
2010-11-17 11:03:01 | patty |
i agree with the others, keep it up.
could you please read mine and give an opinion. i am new, |
2010-12-29 22:05:50 | eve |
i liked it.it reminded it of me.great job!! |
2011-03-17 04:35:12 | Sarah |
i really like this. its really good |
2011-09-28 22:11:13 | Fore |
Nice! I like it. :) |