My Daughter The Private Eye(4), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
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My daughter the private eye,
no one can deny she has the ability,
The wit and tranquility,
she captures the heart in sincerity.
Her journey has been a long one,
and her fortune laid up for another,
She owns the love of many,
but especially me and her brother.
She never sees the 'gold',
that's so abundantly endowed in her soul,
If only she could see what a fortune it could be,
A king's wealth would be shy ,truth be told!
Don't let her small stature mislead you
it's her own type lesson in procedure
her thoughful process,and heartful suggest
will excell in any test.
My daughter the Private Eye,
Which captures the heart and the eye
will drill you and query and make you so weary,
of any secret that you may hold
as she easily walks by,and it makes her heart fly
toward attainable and questful demise,
Yet, she is resourcefully wise.
God Bless my daughter the Private Eye!
© Copyright Gloria /glostarg
August 2,2005
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| Posted: 2008-04-22 22:22:40 UTC |
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| 2005-08-11 03:02:07 | AHopelessMemory |
| i dont know if i already put a comment,i thought i did. . . but this is really really good! i like it a lot! | |
| 2005-08-12 18:37:51 | Silent Cries |
| I have no kids but if I did this would apply | |
| 2005-09-28 22:28:10 | Dy'mond (yup yup goon) |
| I UNDDADIGG WHAT YOU SAYIN'. YOUR CHILD IS EVERYTHING. I DON'T HAVE CHILDREN, BUT I DO HAVE A NEPHEW THAT MIZE WELL BE MY CHILD. SO I REALLY DO UNDDADIGG WHAT YOU SAYIN',AND IT COMES FROM THE HEART. FROM MOTHER TO CHILD, THATS THE BEST FRIENDSHIP EVER HAD. | |
| 2007-04-07 03:53:44 | A Lonely Song |
| This is great! Youre a wonderful writer. Thank you for your comments, especially 'I Hate'. That poem was the most personal I've gotten and it was hard for me to post on a website where people can easily judge and call me mental or crazy. I'm still slowly coming to terms with my anxiety disorder and I can't thank you enough for your kind words. Courtney | |