(no), by Finding Myself♥♥ Subscribe to rss feed for Finding Myself♥♥

"can i do it"?
   i don't think so
"can i stay there"?
   i don't know
"do you trust"?
   of course
"here it goes"
   (no)






the "" are him
i am the second lines
the () are my thoughts

hope you enjoy
Posted: 2007-05-13 20:34:03 UTC

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2005-09-23 22:28:33thndrhwk
Oddly haunting; it's kind of wierd but interesting.

2005-09-24 07:16:38ill haven
I like it! It makes the reader think, which is what i love in poems. I hate it both in poems and in horror movies when they dumb the audience down by telling them EVERYTHING!!! cough cough Cry Wolf cough cough. good write -af-