Have You Ever? pt1, by notsoinnocent Subscribe to rss feed for notsoinnocent

have u ever felt like the person u luv most is just 
slipping away slowly and u wanna save them but u cant?

its like u wanna pull them up but ur afraid that ur gonna 
let go so u let them fall anyway?

like their walking away and u wanna stop them so u call 
their name but they cant hear u so they just keep walking 
not turning around just looking straight not saying good 
bye cuz they dont wanna hurt u?

u feel like ur falling cuz ur hurt so badly cuz u know in 
ur heart that their not coming back.

u watch as they walk further and further away.

u start to cry.

u want them to come back.

u call them again but they dont look back.

they just keep walking furter and further away.

not turning around.

not looking back.

just walking into the darkness never to say good bye 
never to return.

which brings me back to my question:
have u ever felt like the person u luv most is slipping 
away slowly and u wanna save them but u cant?
Posted: 2005-10-09 17:08:03 UTC

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2005-10-11 17:36:47Amby
I wish people would take the time to type in those few extra letters in simple words like "you" instead of using internet slang in poetry. I give you a 1. For using internet slang. It makes me not even want to read the poem. Dont use "u" and "luv", come on, take the time and punch in those few extra letters for cripes sake.