Perfect Love(48), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ Subscribe to rss feed for <font color= ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ ">




To wake in the morning, with the sun in your face.
not the best of awakenings ,but your love I can take!
The natural sweetness of lying next to you,the silk of your
body just lying there nude.

I watch you and wonder how that destiny unfolds, not a
moment too soon though, I am here now to hold, The love of
my life and the  mate of my soul,with the greatest of love
our forever unfolds.

Time warp of magnitude has cleared us the way, and  offered
a space in a brand new day.one moment of regret will not be
in our mind, and a loving companion  will meld our two
times.

The spirit of love whose agile, and fresh will accompany our
journey into our soft nest.
while touches and  caresses are familiar regime,albeit that
which  never yet been theme.

According to logic and past dreams of love, our path of life
is written from above.I love you with more than intensity
can show,and I paint our love magic, this i'm sure you
know!

On wings of an eagle you carried me safe to that haven of
rest of our love and future sake.I'm enthralled and
captivated with you, the look in your eyes tells  of  our
love and how true.


In magic  awakenings, the passion does arise, with out a
word but,the look in your eyes.knowing my love is welcome
and given to you true,and  my lips are full with caresses of
you.

tell me of a love more perfect than this, and I'll promise
you another thousand year kiss!

2005© Copyright Gloria /glostarg
Posted: 2010-06-19 01:43:39 UTC

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2005-04-14 15:12:21Depressed_des
I like this poem as i love someone at the moment...even if they do not know it yet.

2005-04-17 01:04:38jaime
I really like this poem. The emotion that comes from it is overwhelming and I encourage you to keep writing, you obviously have talent.

2005-04-27 05:25:39 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Dear Depressed_des, have heart! and love with everything in you! surely the other will find your love on the beautiful wings of hope.glostarg

2005-04-27 05:29:16 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Dear jaime, Thank you for you warm and encouraging words.I am happy that you liked my poem .Thank you for your feedback. glostarg

2005-07-14 04:40:11ladycalvert
This poem shows a lot of heart. I love it.

2005-07-27 23:56:58**Samara********
This poem was mad crazy

2005-08-10 18:11:36Heart-Less
i like tis poem because it reminds me as myself. keep writing.

2005-11-20 18:10:54a rose by any otha name
I love the message in the poem very sweet it brings me back to days when I felt lost in love's bliss

2005-12-25 23:14:37Crimson.Wings
Thank u 4 commenting on my poems. i love this poem, u are really good at writing poems.

2006-02-06 22:25:27Innocent until proven Guilty
Your poem or short story is really good I can relate to it. Keep it up. Good job!

2006-02-24 00:19:22.:side:walk:.
Wow, I am soooooo speachless, it makes me want to be in love soooooo bad! Its focuses on the positive side of love,with trust and its filled with sincereity! - Mandy

2006-12-29 19:15:27Chalan
Very well written. It takes a person back to the time when they first fell in love with someone.

2007-01-02 23:28:11Chalan
Very well written!!

2007-01-12 22:36:40fallén
this is so good , ty G1ostarg

2007-01-20 02:59:42sk8t3R gal 4 eva
this is such a good poem. i love all of the poems you have written! this is one of my favorites that you have written. keep on believing! have faith in everything! stay strong. oh and keep writting poems too. they are great!!!

2007-01-24 17:33:17~*PuRely*DeVine*~
wow this is beautiful thank you for commenting on my poems that really means a lot to me

2007-02-27 05:46:01liberty moon
hi i dnt knw u at all but i feel like u would be a gr8 help in my quest for answers. u knw when bad things happen and we get hurt we always ask the question where was God and the answer we get is He was there. my question is one i've been battling with for a while. where is there? please pray abt it and email me at. [email protected]. thank u and God bless

2007-02-28 07:38:44 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Hi Liberty Moon I emailed you the answer. Glo

2007-03-19 05:41:11Angel of Music
Great Job! I reaaly like this poem.

2007-03-28 10:16:52FarmGirl
nice

2007-05-24 17:49:43Teresa
WOW!!!! THATS GREAT I REALLY LIKED IT KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

2007-05-30 13:34:53Chuck Shorter
Dear Gloria, You are definitely a poet par excellence,of that I have no doubt.I also want to thank you for that lovely feedback, it's a poem in itself. Don't let this tremendous talent go to waste; publish your stuff ASAP {if you haven't already}. God bless and wish you the best of everything in life. Luv Chuck

2007-07-26 00:46:26a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.
lovvvvvvvvvve it!

2007-10-03 14:34:47Anthony Cardon
This poem is just amazing! I'm surprised by your use of words that flow smoothly in a graceful pattern that creates a poetic quality without the use of rhyming. Very well done!

2007-10-11 00:47:56♥breauna♥
your are really good..juss to let you know..lol

2007-10-26 23:10:06Linda G.
Hi Gloria- Thank you for sharing you lovely poetry. I am very touched by your thoughts and feelings.Best wishes to you..Linda G

2007-11-21 04:15:29Firec
beautiful. please read some of my work as well :]

2007-12-27 05:54:51Anthony Cardon
The emotion expressed in this poem seems to really seep out of the soul like the paper is a sponge against your heart. Wonderful!

2008-01-05 04:45:14Sheila
That is really beautiful!

2008-01-31 03:25:16Anthony Cardon
Absolutely beautiful!

2008-02-16 11:01:22Invisible Poet
i dont understand what you meant about my poem plz explain thnx

2008-02-21 08:44:15Invisible Poet
thnx for all the comments and im glad at least one person like my poems

2008-05-22 08:19:37 SOUMYA ( RAWKSTAR )
REELY KEWL

2008-05-25 19:57:01Annie B. SnowRaven
Amazing... !!!!!!

2008-10-29 06:40:35Invisible Poet
Have a new poem that might appeal to your tastes (Birth) let me know what you think please

2008-12-08 10:43:13LostChild
Amazing poem!!!

2009-01-25 03:45:03Natural_beauty_Ashe
i love this its like so much expressed in not so many words

2009-03-07 21:22:22SAMIRA JONES
I LIKE THIS POEM ALOT..YOU PUT YOUR HEART IN THIS ONE BECAUSE I FELT YOUR EMOTIOMS. THE WORDS YOU USED MADE THE WHOLE POEM SO UNIQUE..YOU HAVE A BRIGHT FUTRE KEEP GOING. KEEP WRITTEN AND EXPESSING...GOOD LUCK

2009-06-26 00:59:59ash
it's just. incredible.

2009-08-06 19:48:21♥ Leah ☺
beautiful! i wish i could give you a 10

2009-10-30 19:57:44Moon
Tis thee's epic very well done. Thou hopes to find more poets like thee.

2009-11-07 00:26:30//Stillsilent//
that was amazing!! ure a natrual.

2009-12-06 06:21:22~♥miss crazy♥~
i like this poem it is the best and it is emotional and i love it.

2009-12-20 09:08:15dispersed_sky
oh glostarg ur so awsum ....!!!!!!!!1st of all.congratulation u gt9 rating frm ma side...(smile)..and from now ill b a frequent reader for ur poems...i think that ur such a good writer..u can b an inspiration fr ppl like me.....(hehehe) wat else..u roxx nd keep roxin

2010-04-15 19:12:38Gabrielle
Beautiful....

2010-04-25 04:13:44B3(k$_Broken13
this is sucha great poem. keep writing you obviously have talent. i mean if this is what you love.. then go for it.. you seem so wise and smart about what you say.. i hope you dont mind by me asking this but.. i need help with my own poetry.. and i was wondering if you could read some of mine.. and let me know what you think or you can email me at [email protected] i really would appreciate your help. thanks.. and great job on this one

2010-05-19 04:15:29~Angela~
thats awesome!!!how u get the color 2 change?!sweet.keeep doin wat ur doin on here!-rose juliette`

2010-05-28 02:57:45Gemali
What an amazing poem! I like it, i agree wiht past comments you do have a reall talent and I find it impressive that you were able to ryme a poem like this. Keep writing

2010-07-09 02:30:34
Your are a really good poet this is beautiful and describes the place of new love...

2010-07-20 18:08:03Gabrielle
beautiful.

2011-06-22 18:13:32sushil bansal
God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi

2011-06-22 18:14:19sushil bansal
God bless you. You have a wonderful soul.I always like to read your poems. sheel didi

2013-12-21 12:11:57Chuck Shorter
I see true love, passion, tenderness and honesty all rolled into one! this piece of work is "MAGNIFIQUE!"

2014-08-13 04:28:47Natural_beauty_Ashe
Beautiful and pure emotion I love it