"My Thoughts", by Crimson_Tide915 Subscribe to rss feed for Crimson_Tide915

Sitting in a corner
Concentrating on my life 
Thinking of the things 
As time passes me by

Not knowing what to do
And not knowing what to say
I leave myself thinking 
Have I gone to deep

Than I say to myself
Is it any to late
To sort out my memories 
before they start to decay

Now I am sitting here
Sorting my thoughts
Trying to keep
All the good things life brought

Sitting in my corner
Concentrating no more
Leaving my thoughts open
for the world to know
Posted: 2005-11-29 15:24:14 UTC

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2005-11-17 02:42:34love nothing >>--
You sit in that corner babe!! haha kewl poem...

2005-11-17 22:59:36love nothing >>--
Because it keeps talking about sitting in a corner...and im weird like that like with my friends in volleyball i say 'you watch that ball fly by jasmine!' or something...just me...lol ttyl

2005-11-18 23:35:24waterlily
can anyone go 2 deep in truth?hmm?

2005-11-23 02:45:10Kendall
I liked it but you need to fix the spelling of 'bye' to 'by'. You already know I think you have talent from the poets.com site my friend!

2005-11-29 19:07:36Jennifer Wilson
Hello, this is Jennyleigh from the Poets'Workshop. My name here is Jennifer Wilson. Now, I found your poem to be very introspective, deep and interesting. I liked it. Keep up the good work. I have found the only way to improve is to keep writing.

2005-12-12 22:11:33malarni
i know what you mean, when you no longer know what to say about your life, trying to sort through everything, sometimes it is just to much! I liked it, keep up the good work. :)