Autumn Wind, by Seamus Subscribe to rss feed for Seamus

Whisp’ring softly among the leaves,
Whistling faintly across the eaves.
Creeping, sneaking, cold fingers reaching, it’s coming
around again.

Dancing briskly amid the leaves,
Gently, quickly, around it weaves.
Wheeling, banking, onward it’s taking its partners across
the glen.

Piercing, biting, not yet knife-like,
Chilling child and adult alike.
Rising, falling, it is foretelling, winter confined to the
den.

‘Cross the Earth the autumn wind blows,
Lifting leaves wherever it goes.
Cooling, dark’ning, the seasons changing, fall comes to
the world of men.
Posted: 2005-12-13 05:57:13 UTC

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2005-12-14 02:51:13The Space Between
Very well written.

2005-12-14 10:57:04The Naked Owl
Absolutely and perfectly flawless in every way. I'd give it an 11 but they won't let me. In fact I can't seem to get the voting button to work at all. Do you know if maybe I'm doing something wrong?

2005-12-14 18:02:51Faith
I like this... it's full of amazing imagery and language! Well done indeed!

2005-12-15 02:50:39waterlily
i giggled at the word Glenn.my dear old Irish friend.(who wanted 2 marry me on the banks of a sweet innocent Kisss!)...funny how that memory pops out into view...i like the natural flow and rhythm of your naturalistick poem ..yes it speaks to me...

2005-12-15 02:51:41waterlily
oh yeah get a load of your name sem!

2005-12-20 11:23:45abs
thats is such a gorgeous poem! its flows so gently, the structure really compliments the subject matter. i love it! :)

2006-01-04 18:03:06*Diamond Rose Petals*
wow, ur better than shakespare!! im giving u a 9