The Latest Trend, by longingchainsme Subscribe to rss feed for longingchainsme

I hate the pictures that we take
Perserving the memories of these mistakes
Falling down flat on the floor
Seeing these problems we flaunt and more

I hate the frames we house them in
Showing the laughter, the fun, the sin
Proving only that we can fail
In these bodies, warn and frail

I hate the lies that we both lead
The carriage of doubt drawn by the steed
Faking the smile we wear with a frown
Downing the sorrow, slowly we drown

The one thing I've got left to hate
Is the lie I've told, an open gate
The door that you can see right through
Scream at me till black and blue

I know I shouldn't tell you this
But its something big I knew you'd miss
I'm sorry my dear, I've failed again
Maybe this is my latest trend
Posted: 2005-12-20 00:00:55 UTC

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2005-12-21 18:21:47Faith
Oops... sorry i pressed the wrong button, i ment to vote, THEN comment. Anyways, this poem is amazing, in every way. I love it and the flow and the rhythm... truly amazing.

2006-04-28 17:19:05lost the lonely dead
i like many elements within this writting its a good piece of work the begining seemed a little shaky to me

2006-09-12 08:32:01User
Hey..this is good..amazing flow..