How A Memory Is Made, by Trish
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A memory is made in a moment
Imprinted not only in our minds
But etched in the fibers of our hearts
A scent, A color, A sound, A name
May cause recessed, faded images of grey
To take life and spring forward
Suddenly its as if you were transported
All the way back to that moment
The moment a memory was made |
| Posted: 2006-07-29 02:27:59 UTC |
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| 2005-12-23 15:17:18 | Snapped |
| wow dudette, that is brilliant, i love the whole circle effect, at the start and the finish almost same sentance. awesome |
| 2006-01-04 20:48:33 | Crimson.Wings |
| this is such a cool poem! i agree w/ wat "snapped" said, the circle effect is neat |
| 2006-01-09 05:19:34 | Trish |
| I really appreciate all of your comments. I stopped writting for a while because of some personal things, but I'm back at it. A little rusty but back at it. I only wish that I had some of my old material to let you read. |
| 2006-02-02 04:31:38 | Trish |
| Great news for any one reading this, this poem has been selected to be published. And its a finalist in a contest I would not have entered it if it wasn't for all your warm comments. Thankyou |