Get off your cross, by Blackened_Sky
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Don’t you preach to me
From your altar up high
The difference between
Right and wrong
I’ll live my life
The way I want too
And that may be wrong
But I don’t care
I don’t need your
Biblical nonsense
I don’t need your
Superior Attitude
I’ll live my life
The way I want too
Get off your cross
You fucking martyr
I’ll make my own mind up
I don’t need you
Get off your cross
You fucking martyr
I’ll live my life
The way I want too
Fuck you
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| Posted: 2006-05-12 19:08:00 UTC |
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| 2006-01-07 01:50:19 | Faith |
| Too bad Jesus died especially for people like you... even though you don't deserve it in the least. |
| 2006-01-07 02:08:17 | Blackened_Sky |
| Unfortuantly I wasnt talking about jesus or god, Its about people who hold themselves up to be saints and force their believes down other peoples throats. Everyone has a right to believe what the want too believe. I'm sorry if I offened you. I do in fact believe in something im just not sure what. I dont it can be describe by a 3 letter word |
| 2006-01-07 23:49:41 | . QUEENIE . |
| its the hypocracy that drives me up the wall personally. the judgement. why cant each be left alone to walk his or her path the way she or he wnats to be judged by the ultimate in the end? it was a good poem. . . anmd i understand about the people who hold themselves up to saintly. |
| 2006-04-28 18:16:13 | lost the lonely dead |
| well it is offensive no matter how you look at it...you wrote it to be offensive so of course people will be offeneded....i would suggest you choose a more subtle way to vent your rage, and certainly something more creative, i understand the venting thing sometimes we just gotta say it so im not really preaching at you myself....just if you want to write poetry, "MY SUGGESTION" is that you think and mull over it a little more, perfect it....i wrote an agry piece about my son of a bitch father its called Throat of Fire....someday i hope it can be changed but as it lays now....its all up to him....anyway yeah, when i first read this i got a different impression then your response to faith |
| 2006-05-12 19:07:48 | Blackened_Sky |
| Im sorry but I will not change my poem it means what it means. Just cos it means something different to you and you dont agree with it doesn't it make it any less valid |
| 2008-12-17 23:38:15 | !!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!! |
| THOSE THAT PREACH ARE HOPEFULY ONLY THERE TO HELP BECAUSE A BOOK IS SO VERY USELESS TO THE BLIND |