The Ripples of Elizabeth, by punchenella Subscribe to rss feed for punchenella

In Norway, 
Elizabeth was born.

I did not speak her language,
But she shared a nut with me anyway.
A straight from the tree hazelnut,
			      Elizabeth,
			      Me.

Green and hard-shelled we cracked.
Our jaws became traditional tools
And we ate.
We ate the path, muddy and steep
Well worn with bridges over quick trickle-trickle.
We filled our water bottles here
And continued to hike for . . .
Well . . . time didn't matter at all.

We ate the grass, that green grass
So alive in the valley and the wet stones
That lay by the waterside.
We showered in fresh falls dancing 
On fallen trees in the rain;

No drama, no games.

And the ripples of Elizabeth disappeared
When I came back to America.


Posted: 2006-01-23 22:00:25 UTC

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2006-01-24 02:14:49Faith
You have a unique way with words... interesting

2006-01-25 00:02:26Spiritual Beauty
i agree with faith

2006-01-25 00:10:59punchenella
thank both of you, I appreciate the feedback, but "interesting" is one of those words that has taken on several meanings, and I don't know if I understand it anymore. XXXX with respect, P

2006-10-02 08:41:27User
Like some kind of fables or what..I kind of like it though I don't actually get it..

2011-05-07 21:03:35suzieQ
Dude. this is awesome! I have had enough of poems with little to no rhyme scheme but you rocked it. Nicely done