Rejected by Death, by Loneliness is condescending Subscribe to rss feed for Loneliness is condescending

She's not dieing 
She is the only one living 
We are the ones who are dead 
Left behind in this cold uncaring place 
She will feel the sun on her back once more. 
While we are entombed by ice, buried in the snow
Her soul will be graced with peace and laid to rest
Ours tormented and scared, forever walking 
Flowers bloom around her feet 
Cast among the vines to sleep 
Her eyes may be dull but ours are blind 
We missed the chance to glimpse another way 
She's not dieing 
She is the only one living 
We are the ones who are dead 

Posted: 2005-11-02 04:22:28 UTC

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2005-02-24 01:41:42My_pain_your_thrill
This is very touching. Deep. Im interested in what made you write it..email me if you can to tell me... [email protected]

2006-10-06 05:33:24lost the lonely dead
i do like this one as well it seems to imply the opposite is true in reality and that this is all sarcasm, that the 'girl' is blind living in an imaginary world where everything is perfect for her alone

2007-03-07 01:42:09User
This is rather true in an idealistic way..and emotional too..feels like it ain't so bad beind dead sometimes..