Embrace; My way out, by lost the lonely dead
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If I could embrace the things I wish to
Then I would face something I could never
My one wish is the coming of my cue
Then one wish to truely see such a cure
How could I follow down this perlious path?
Trust someone to die for my salvation?
As scarlet are the stains of aftermath
Is life some kind of figurative pun?
A lamb upon a cross like those of old
Is there a price I could not pay?
To lay down a life I never took hold
Finding no rest in all the world today
Embrace contentment, a task, I search out
Embracing this task, shall be, my way out
(my pathetic attempt to write a sonnet *grin*) |
| Posted: 2006-04-06 16:47:53 UTC |
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| 2006-02-24 18:29:22 | Faith |
| It's not at all pathetic, i enjoyed reading it! Thanks for all your comments on my peoms, they mean a lot! |
| 2006-02-25 05:30:03 | lost the lonely dead |
| your welcome (my teacher says about this that he likes the thought but i might want to work on the flow of it a little more but he did seem to like it) anyway...thank you too |
| 2006-06-14 21:23:09 | Kirsty (living in the light) |
| I love this poem, it is Good, in fact it is excellent. If you wnat pop in and check out osme of my poems Love ya in Christ. Kirsty
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