Embrace; My way out

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By lost the lonely dead •

If I could embrace the things I wish to Then I would face something I could never My one wish is the coming of my cue Then one wish to truely see such a cure How could I follow down this perlious path? Trust someone to die for my salvation? As scarlet are the stains of aftermath Is life some kind of figurative pun? A lamb upon a cross like those of old Is there a price I could not pay? To lay down a life I never took hold Finding no rest in all the world today Embrace contentment, a task, I search out Embracing this task, shall be, my way out (my pathetic attempt to write a sonnet *grin*)

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February 24, 2006 18:29Faith

It's not at all pathetic, i enjoyed reading it! Thanks for all your comments on my peoms, they mean a lot!

February 25, 2006 05:30lost the lonely dead

your welcome (my teacher says about this that he likes the thought but i might want to work on the flow of it a little more but he did seem to like it) anyway...thank you too

June 14, 2006 21:23 Kirsty (living in the light)

I love this poem, it is Good, in fact it is excellent. If you wnat pop in and check out osme of my poems Love ya in Christ. Kirsty
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June 16, 2006 03:53lost the lonely dead

hm thanks ok i will...yeah...god bless