locked up words

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By .:side:walk:. •

I stare at you You dont know it I smile secretly in my mind you don't know you should never you get me everytime its too bad we get along so well I act normally, relaxed I know you liked someone and you think your alone why do I have to like someone like you? Its hard to not be with you we can talk about everything oh, please no not again its no fair its hard to not like you you may be not the one everyone wants but I can be myself I want to be friends but its hard to not be words can slip so easily or in thought but I keep them locked inside forever. © since 2006 - 2008 and present

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February 25, 2006 03:48 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Very nice poem, speaks to me of someone having feelings but cannot let them be known. It's hard at times to show these feelings but remember one Good tried and true method...To thine ownself be true! God bless you! Glostarg
Thanks too for your coments on my poems! :)

February 28, 2006 00:49.:side:walk:.

Thank you!

March 1, 2006 04:05The Space Between

Great one... I think many will be able to relate to these feelings... love it.

March 10, 2006 23:04Crimson.Wings

I thought this was an excellent poem. Good job

August 13, 2006 02:46.:side:walk:.

Thank you for the good quoate Golstarg!

August 13, 2006 15:19.:side:walk:.

Glostarg*

August 20, 2006 00:53.:side:walk:.

I keep on messing up lol

August 28, 2006 21:39breathe+me

yeah. this speaks to me too!

August 28, 2006 21:59.:side:walk:.

thnx again. ALL OF YOU ARE NICE TO ME THAN YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH!

August 28, 2006 22:45.:side:walk:.

thnxs everyone

June 11, 2007 19:26Only one ggirl right for me

I like this one. It hits the point dead on. Love it.

D.C.

May 12, 2013 00:32Auden

I love this! Exactly how I feel sometimes, could check out some of my poems?