Living A Lie

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By Sam •

Last Year: You were so nice You joked with me You talked to me You seemed happy This Year: You're mean You hate me You won't talk to me You don't seem happy anymore If you only knew how much I looked up to you If you only knew how much I thought you liked me But Wait... What's This? If you only knew how much I hurt inside If you only knew how much you've put me through And to think that I let you! - You pretend to like me I actually like you - So which one of us is living a lie?

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March 10, 2006 23:03Crimson.Wings

Good poem. Really creative. I like the title.

March 13, 2006 18:50Faith

It's in a very unique structure... i enjoyed reading it.

August 22, 2006 08:49User

Amazing..I have not seen something like this before..interesting..

May 11, 2007 22:41Veracity

I can totally relate to this poem. In the past, these were the people I thought were my "friends". Now I know who my true friends are: the people who are always nice and stick by me. Wonderful poem.

May 13, 2007 17:41 *****Junior Walker*****

quality poem,nice structure 2,and thanx for the comment

May 23, 2007 17:44Angel of Music

Great job! I really enjoyed reading it!

June 28, 2007 03:34Simply-Me-20104

I always try to look at the poems that have been commented the most on a person's page. It's interesting to see how one poem can be related to by so many people! Very expressive!!

March 31, 2008 18:22soccer gurl in love

i like this poem it really shows your feeling and i can relate

July 16, 2010 18:57Violet Crystal

Very relatable. Unique and incredible. Great job.