Living A Lie, by Sam
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Last Year:
You were so nice
You joked with me
You talked to me
You seemed happy
This Year:
You're mean
You hate me
You won't talk to me
You don't seem happy anymore
If you only knew how much I looked up to you
If you only knew how much I thought you liked me
But Wait...
What's This?
If you only knew how much I hurt inside
If you only knew how much you've put me through
And to think that I let you!
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You pretend to like me
I actually like you
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So which one of us is living a lie? |
| Posted: 2006-03-28 01:01:38 UTC |
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| 2006-03-10 23:03:31 | Crimson.Wings |
| Good poem. Really creative. I like the title. |
| 2006-03-13 18:50:18 | Faith |
| It's in a very unique structure... i enjoyed reading it. |
| 2006-08-22 08:49:35 | User |
| Amazing..I have not seen something like this before..interesting.. |
| 2007-05-11 22:41:50 | Veracity |
| I can totally relate to this poem. In the past, these were the people I thought were my "friends". Now I know who my true friends are: the people who are always nice and stick by me. Wonderful poem. |
| 2007-05-23 17:44:31 | Angel of Music |
| Great job! I really enjoyed reading it! |
| 2007-06-28 03:34:06 | Simply-Me-20104 |
| I always try to look at the poems that have been commented the most on a person's page. It's interesting to see how one poem can be related to by so many people! Very expressive!! |
| 2008-03-31 18:22:29 | soccer gurl in love |
| i like this poem it really shows your feeling and i can relate |
| 2010-07-16 18:57:13 | Violet Crystal |
| Very relatable. Unique and incredible. Great job. |