There is a pain...

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By lost the lonely dead •

I see a scar, no clothing can hide I see a pain, no makeup betrays I've found the source, of all the blood A wound so deep, and a stab, a knife Coming from your back it protrudes menacingly Glaring, asking, what will I do now? I see a depth, no smile hides I see a death, the eyes believe I've found no cure, to stop the bleeding A sleep so deep, you stand, still asleep Coming from your dreams of perfect innocence Begging, pleading, what will you do now? I cant see all the pain I cant cure it all away... just something i wrote..its a little rough but...yeah...

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February 28, 2006 18:50Loneliness is condescending

i like this one whats it about? well more of a who is it about?

February 28, 2006 20:29lost the lonely dead

oh wouldn't you like to know? *grins* well i'll talk to you about it but you still have a question to ask me and you know how horrable i am at taking this suspense i might explode, ok maybe not...whatever but i will say it's someone we know

March 1, 2006 06:38Loneliness is condescending

i would like to know much yes that question will you explode may i see? i'll ask it later

March 1, 2006 15:16lost the lonely dead

*grins* ok well unfortunately there would be blood if i blew so maybe i should keep the cork on it, anyway this is sort of a result of reading some of 'someones' poetry on 'some' poetry site i think maybe....

December 6, 2006 03:19User

Hey..this is so relatable to me..some scars does last forever and some wounds never heals..

December 12, 2006 02:31lost the lonely dead

thanks...and yes its true