By <font color="#FFFFFF">The Space Between</font> •
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hahahahaha... for a moment there i felt like i was reading my own work. i've had plenty of moments like that... its funny how we're able to make thoughts exist on paper but then in seconds completely obliterate it and it suddenly doesn't exist anymore! most recently i wrote something similar called "cerebral constipation." you know that feeling of needing to write, so much you feel you need to just vomit out of your brain but for some reason its like the tubes or channels you use to let it out are just really clogged? maybe you don't... but i felt like that and ended up writing this really intense thing with dinosaurs and rubber bands and it actually got sort of erotic. it was weird but in the end i think it helped with the constipation :D
this is really great by the way... with too many thoughts, the best thing to do is let it out a word at a time and before you know it, it's a little less cluttered in your brain and you create poetry that sometimes doesn't even sound like things you write. hah! but this is really great... i just said that.. i'll say it again! no!!! i say AWESOME-TASTICAL!
there.