Run to our Deaths, by lost the lonely dead
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Let’s run far, far away
Falling away for a day
Only to die a waste
Such sad sorrow
If it would be fate’s calling
Cleansing rain, there to wash the blood away
Let me lie in death’s crimson embrace
Till one day I die and am gone away
Christ’s cross about the neck of mortal treason
Bottleneck the lies and fables
Cries for innocence finally heard
Once in a place far away
Peace shall remain an ideology
Or maybe a feeling within
Wars rage on the world coming to not
Desperately I shall wait in a place far away
For one day in death’s form I will lay and hopefully never
wake up
i really wonder what people will make of this...im fairly
certain i shall be viewed as crazy and that would be
marvelous, whatever the case, please analyze or comment on
this piece of work |
| Posted: 2006-04-06 16:48:32 UTC |
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| 2006-03-09 20:38:47 | Faith |
| I don't think you're crazy!! And the poem is really good, lots of interesting imagery and such. |
| 2006-03-10 23:08:51 | Crimson.Wings |
| I don't think you're crazy, either. This is a really great poem. Good job. I gave you a 9. |
| 2006-03-12 06:49:45 | Loneliness is condescending |
| i think your crazy and i know your crazy i have proof... you thought you loved me see crazy right there i enjoy this poem muchly and the first two lines reminded me that were running away dont forget and let me leave you behind
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| 2006-03-14 05:26:47 | lost the lonely dead |
| uh....yeah.....um i could say something but i probably shouldnt |
| 2006-03-14 05:28:36 | lost the lonely dead |
| and yes im still waiting for you to steal me, but leaving me behind would just be really mean.... |