Run to our Deaths

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By lost the lonely dead

Let’s run far, far away Falling away for a day Only to die a waste Such sad sorrow If it would be fate’s calling Cleansing rain, there to wash the blood away Let me lie in death’s crimson embrace Till one day I die and am gone away Christ’s cross about the neck of mortal treason Bottleneck the lies and fables Cries for innocence finally heard Once in a place far away Peace shall remain an ideology Or maybe a feeling within Wars rage on the world coming to not Desperately I shall wait in a place far away For one day in death’s form I will lay and hopefully never wake up i really wonder what people will make of this...im fairly certain i shall be viewed as crazy and that would be marvelous, whatever the case, please analyze or comment on this piece of work

Current vote: 9.0 / 5

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March 9, 2006 20:38Faith

I don't think you're crazy!! And the poem is really good, lots of interesting imagery and such.

March 10, 2006 23:08Crimson.Wings

I don't think you're crazy, either. This is a really great poem. Good job. I gave you a 9.

March 11, 2006 03:58lost the lonely dead

oh but i am lol

March 12, 2006 06:49Loneliness is condescending

i think your crazy and i know your crazy i have proof... you thought you loved me see crazy right there i enjoy this poem muchly and the first two lines reminded me that were running away dont forget and let me leave you behind

March 14, 2006 05:26lost the lonely dead

uh....yeah.....um i could say something but i probably shouldnt

March 14, 2006 05:28lost the lonely dead

and yes im still waiting for you to steal me, but leaving me behind would just be really mean....