The Walk (a short story), by Lillian Subscribe to rss feed for Lillian

Walking

	On an early summer day in 2004, I sat in my room awaiting
my best friend’s arrival.  The sun was out and shined
faintly into my room.  Finally, the doorbell rang and I
sprinted down the stairs to answer it.  
	“Hi Brittany!” I said to my smiling friend who held her
pack over one shoulder and a guitar case in her opposite
hand.  She greeted me, and we ran to the living room to get
on the computer and listen to music.  Looking out the window
again, an idea came to me.  
	“Want to take a walk up the hill?” I asked.  
	“Yeah!  We’ll bring our CD players, too,” she
replied. 
	Five minutes later, Brittany was walking ahead of me out my
front door with her black Columbia jacket on, along with her
familiar white tennis shoes that had thick, bright pink
laces slinking through them.  I wore my lucky blue jeans and
black hoodie.  Both of us had our CD players in hand,
bobbing our heads to some of our favorite classic rock
bands.  The sun was shining on me, warming my face and
making it hard to see Brittany, now walking next to me in
the empty street.  
	As we strolled up the street, I decided I wanted to show
Brittany more than just up the hill.  “Let’s walk all
the way to the recreation park.  I’m not allowed to, but
who’s going to catch us?  It’s only a little further.”
 
	“All right,” Brittany replied, “as long as you think
it’s okay.” 
	Side by side, we continued our walk in the sunlight,
conversing about life now, more than listening to our music.
 We had been best friends for such a short time, but the bud
that started it all was surely the most big and beautiful
flower in bloom that we would each ever know. 
	On the way back toward my house, I watched Brittany out of
the corner of my eye.  I knew then that she wasn’t the
only one as happy as me to be walking with someone, rather
than alone, like we both did only a few months before this
day.  Brittany really was the greatest best friend anyone
could ever ask for in their lifetime.     
Posted: 2008-06-30 07:29:00 UTC

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