All that makes me

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By Loneliness is condescending •

Empty field, Echoed trees, Silent tears, Shadowed fears, A Dream that dies with Liars eyes New words I need to make a scean To fill my mind with graceful plays With words to fall my lips rejoiced When nothing seemed to break And all was once set right Shadowed fears, Silent tears, Echoed trees , Empty fields.

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March 13, 2006 19:28lost the lonely dead

i think i like this the line that really caught my attention was 'a dream that dies with liar's eyes'

March 16, 2006 21:15~*PuRely*DeVine*~

I was thinking the same thing as lost that line was beautiful..i really enjoyed this poem, lovely

April 2, 2006 20:12ChuKico PrIme

yeah that's my favorite line too. and i like the words. strong and touching. two tumbs way up!.