Pieces of Paradise, by Loneliness is condescending Subscribe to rss feed for Loneliness is condescending

Thinking of the time we spent together 
Hurting all the ones close to me 
Inside I'm falling apart
Desperately searching for someone to open my bleeding soul
I'm lost inside this deep despair  
Soft whispers brush across my cheek 
They try and carry off my tears 
Hanging on to the hearts of others
Eclipsing the sun with pain
 Pleasure felt so deep 
Leading from this place of honor 
Appealing to the eyes of men 
Conceit is heavy on my heart 
Entangling my with the souls of others
Wishing to turn back
Harmonizing with the sound of death
Clasping to that finial picture of your sweet face 
Rendering me useless, a tear escapes my eye 
Shrouded with your scent 
I will never let go of this feeling 
Wishing that I could take your place 
Inside I'm already dead 
Lucid dreams steal away hope of better days 
Lost without a prayer 
It's time to sober up and live 
Posted: 2005-02-24 06:16:16 UTC

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2005-04-26 00:10:47wishing_on_stars
extremely deep my friend. I like it.

2005-05-03 23:54:29My_pain_your_thrill
I agree, this is so deep and powerful...you are such a great writer.

2005-10-18 19:09:40Don't build lies on ice cubes.
This is a great poem, very vivid and full of emotion.

2006-10-06 05:45:42lost the lonely dead
if i could rank negatives i think it might be like negative one since the top five category is filling up, its great and really sad and great and sad and just soooo you

2007-03-19 21:29:50Angel of Music
GREAT POEM!

2007-06-06 21:29:32.:side:walk:.
so brilliant, very beautiful! I feel the same way sometimes