Pieces of Paradise

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By Loneliness is condescending •

Thinking of the time we spent together Hurting all the ones close to me Inside I'm falling apart Desperately searching for someone to open my bleeding soul I'm lost inside this deep despair Soft whispers brush across my cheek They try and carry off my tears Hanging on to the hearts of others Eclipsing the sun with pain Pleasure felt so deep Leading from this place of honor Appealing to the eyes of men Conceit is heavy on my heart Entangling my with the souls of others Wishing to turn back Harmonizing with the sound of death Clasping to that finial picture of your sweet face Rendering me useless, a tear escapes my eye Shrouded with your scent I will never let go of this feeling Wishing that I could take your place Inside I'm already dead Lucid dreams steal away hope of better days Lost without a prayer It's time to sober up and live

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April 26, 2005 00:10wishing_on_stars

extremely deep my friend. I like it.

May 3, 2005 23:54My_pain_your_thrill

I agree, this is so deep and powerful...you are such a great writer.

October 18, 2005 19:09Don't build lies on ice cubes.

This is a great poem, very vivid and full of emotion.

October 6, 2006 05:45lost the lonely dead

if i could rank negatives i think it might be like negative one since the top five category is filling up, its great and really sad and great and sad and just soooo you

March 19, 2007 21:29Angel of Music

GREAT POEM!

June 6, 2007 21:29.:side:walk:.

so brilliant, very beautiful! I feel the same way sometimes