Broken

By Loneliness is condescending • February 24, 2005 06:16 UTC

Falling hard into the corner I've been left behind striped of my honor From this place of safety I gaze after them Ripping the petals of white from the stem Went to far this time Condemning me for my silent crime When did my eyes go blind? Why did I let go of you my friend? What happened to friends till the end? I've lost all my courage, unable to go on Looking for the promised dawn Your voice is haunting me Strew about the derbies This is all that's left of my life Can't bring myself to use this knife There in the distance is a ray of hope Will it reach me in time, Can I learn to cope Anger fills my heart I will not go out like you Standing tall, Breathing deep, I will see this through The dead cannot forgive Is there still time to live?

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February 27, 2005 16:33My_pain_your_thrill

This is an excellent peice of writing, it makes me think of my cousin's suicide..I like it!

May 14, 2006 08:14lost the lonely dead

its a holy sacred beautiful priceless piece one of your top five i would say and i like how it feels so real....and well you know there are two of us who dont condemn we just want you to be with us through this (i think i could say that of our friend with a certain measure of confidence) and if you dont believe in love at least you seem to believe in *hug* if nothing more live for my sake im living for yours (i think) and the few people i believe might care...even if im wrong, and if i say it a thousand times ill say it again i love your poems