Broken, by Loneliness is condescending
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Falling hard into the corner
I've been left behind striped of my honor
From this place of safety I gaze after them
Ripping the petals of white from the stem
Went to far this time
Condemning me for my silent crime
When did my eyes go blind?
Why did I let go of you my friend?
What happened to friends till the end?
I've lost all my courage, unable to go on
Looking for the promised dawn
Your voice is haunting me
Strew about the derbies
This is all that's left of my life
Can't bring myself to use this knife
There in the distance is a ray of hope
Will it reach me in time, Can I learn to cope
Anger fills my heart I will not go out like you
Standing tall, Breathing deep, I will see this through
The dead cannot forgive
Is there still time to live?
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| Posted: 2005-02-24 06:16:22 UTC |
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| 2005-02-27 16:33:01 | My_pain_your_thrill |
| This is an excellent peice of writing, it makes me think of my cousin's suicide..I like it! |
| 2006-05-14 08:14:07 | lost the lonely dead |
| its a holy sacred beautiful priceless piece one of your top five i would say and i like how it feels so real....and well you know there are two of us who dont condemn we just want you to be with us through this (i think i could say that of our friend with a certain measure of confidence) and if you dont believe in love at least you seem to believe in *hug* if nothing more live for my sake im living for yours (i think) and the few people i believe might care...even if im wrong, and if i say it a thousand times ill say it again i love your poems |